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g u s h e r

draw a day deep
her tide shelter
the kelp and cockerels

the winds carrying
burning peat

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wonder why?
No real content

cheers,
Jess
Everything changes bar one. Neopoet's 'Prime Directive'-
"Critique don't comment".
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

It caught something in your eye
And that is what true poetry is!!
(feel free to ask me what this poem is about)
Thank You for the comment..
I was beginning to think I was going to have to PM
someone for direction!!

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