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Funny What.

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2020-06-06 03:26

I am funny
no
but shall compose

life is nothing else
but bottled up fun
like having
a Soda and rum

could begin
initially for some

but I love
Scotch
it only corks
when taken on the rocks

it gives a hard kick
no manly horse's
does it so quick

many guys
standing besides me
run they say

'mad man'
he

seeking only fun
sad he is now
a dark black horse
but be happy

a real oldie

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Last few words:

trying to be punny funny is it LOL- worthy

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Sat, 2020-06-06 05:54

Nudely huh?...

Now, that would be funny! When we get old, we don't look like we should go around nude. Matter of fact, the more clothes the better! ~ Geezer.
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lovedly

Sat, 2020-06-06 11:24