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Fun Reel Humor
Four fellows went
invitation by heaven sent
we lived like neighbors
hi and bye
never a word beyond that
now all say hurry
the four have gone away
the queue is going shorter
don't miss your chance
no other neighbors may miss you then
when at the end of the queue you plan to remain
left like a desert rat
no one with whom now to chat
the smaller cats will meow
how do you oldie expect
a kiss from me some how
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
If only death we could accept it to happen glad we lived all along Four friends just passed a good bye for ever no hi or bye any further
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2023-01-23 07:35
Eka thanks a million we must love the living for years spent as
many....
I was only wishing
one day
you would read me
In all my muses
incidents and behaviors of human beings
are inclusive
lovedly
Mon, 2023-01-23 09:17
Thank you so muchly
will read your poems morely surely
I coin newer words
allow me.......
Lavender
Mon, 2023-01-23 12:27
Fun Reel Humor
Hello, Lovedly,
It is a certainty, as your poem suggests, and you state so well that we should appreciate these moments we have now with more than a neighborly hello.
Thank you,
Lav
lovedly
Tue, 2023-01-24 04:00
GRATEFUL thanks
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/poems/give-peace-chance-canada
May read this poem
read world wide by over ten grand thousands+++600
Lav
Seren
Mon, 2023-01-23 22:37
Dear Lovely Tata
I don't know of who you write but I can make a guess. It matters not. This is a lovely poem. Written with a yearning for old friends.
You've come so far dear one.
I'm so proud of you.
Love Always Jayne-Chloe xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Tue, 2023-01-24 01:16
So very kind of you Seren
You promised to compose a poem for or on me
Am awaiting
Thanks
Seren
Tue, 2023-01-24 03:51
Lovely
I'm halfway done. Will message you when I post it
Hugs Jayne xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats