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Fuck Warning profanity !!!!

Fuck the clever dicks of this world ,
Who think they know better.
Piss on those who live to put you down.

Shit on those who don't accept my choices,
They are mine and mine alone.
Even if my language makes you frown.

I'm sick of worrying about opinion,
I'm gonna be me.
If you don't like it ,
Then bollocks to this fucking town

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No argument from ME on the subject.

Respectfully, Jim

"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo

http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/Race_9togo

Poetry, is freedom to push the boundaries

Lou.

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Your my champion , a big support, love ya !!

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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A good old - fashioned rant
For those who say I can't
I would tell them where to go
But I think they already know

Hope they take a cue from this
I'll point them where to kiss
Mind not what they have to say
I'll be doing it my way

Couldn't help myself, just keep on being you. ~ Love ya, Gee

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thanks Gee

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Your poetry would improve greatly if you would just say what you REALLY feel lol.........scribbler

lol

lou

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Young lady! Do you eat with that mouth? Sorry, couldn't help myself... there's just so much bullshit on my plate these days.

;-)

And Stan I'd be careful twhat I ask of Lou....she just might tell you, and then what? lol,.

LOL

Lou

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Lou,

What can I say but rock and fuckin' roll~?~!~!

Victor

"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."

Unknown (at least to me)

thanks

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the master of thy dick
piss
and shit
i hate these fuckin words
come out of my fucking
salivary lips

but

we all do say so
yes
loves the fucking word
we like to hear
from a poet like lou
yeah yeah
that's uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

yeah twice
as u don't like to hear
or do thrice

loved

unknowingly or hopefully or willingly

WHICH???

loved

I'm sorry didn't mean to be rude, thank you for your kind remarks

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Lou,

this had a good aggressive tempo and theme, and I liked the rhyming of the last lines. The last stanza was a little short in the last line, so if you wanted it to be uniform, you could add 'fucking'...before 'Town'.

My OCD tells me the last stanza should have lines 2 & 3 on the same line in keeping with the other two stanza's.

Brutishly angry...love it!

HS

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Thanks mate, glad you liked it, i like to give my poems a very strong british feel . when i can, as you know.

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Ian

thank you .

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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