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frustration stew

recently
having observed so many folks
on various forums
across the Internet

A discovery unveiled of its own
half the ones who waste time on the Internet
are either narcissists
egoists
or frustrated human beings
want to be known

Who am I
an unknown entity
what a pity
no one seeks the one
who feels the most
to be sought after

but society trances
such a one
feel the plight of frustration wantonly
if you may like to accept it

Frustration is a willing curse
only with tight lips
one can singularly purse

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This is an interesting piece with a wonderful title.
That second verse is where I would make my only change if this were mine.
who want to be known. I might even suggest, who need to be known.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

need is a wish
one can take it
any one does wish

you need he /she wants

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that sounds much the same as want. To me need is an imperative. Something not merely wished for or desired but something that one cannot live without.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

want
your need
a desire

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wish, desire, demand, longing, yearning

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after the use of military apps for micro processors
the big wigs are spending millions making them
write poetry..
like they make wine without the many ladies feet
or free range chickens...or veal..
stew pot of communities...I remember Rexdale
mid seventies..aunt uncle and cous were there
Then it was all new....all the wealthy skeedaddling
out of the downtown....they moved from Finch
a duplex...but the societal mix..cultural influences
were spreading like a shock wave
but the old poet societies pre computers
engrossed in making the stew of words
bottling it...canning it and putting on the
cooking shows....or spoken word works
ha...many cooks sip much the cooking
sherry...or other to dash up the flavor
..
artificial intelligence Im sure when it finds
awareness if it hasnt already will
have its own brand of soothing
other then just the juice of the bowl
of good grub

...

thank U

helped you
and
you also changed
ur logo snap too

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