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freedom
set the birds free from a clouded mind, caged they're stolen of their lofty spirit
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Free verse
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Comments
tyro
Mon, 2018-07-30 14:33
Hi raj
a very good maxim, one to remember
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
raj
Mon, 2018-07-30 14:47
Tyro
appreciate your reading and your appreciative comment...will encourage me to try out more one line poems...
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raj (sublime_ocean)