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freedom

set the birds free from a clouded mind, caged they're stolen of their lofty spirit
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a very good maxim, one to remember

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The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

appreciate your reading and your appreciative comment...will encourage me to try out more one line poems...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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