YOUR POETRY is so soothing
like droplets from a waterfall
anywhere in the jungles tall
it's spring after all

I like the coherence
of all the waves
the sounds
the rhythm
of poetic lines you score
without a second thought
your poetry is like a harp
a string that a musician does string
it's spring lady poet tree
'tis it spring

here I a message of joy bring
spring has sprung again
I am also happy
to live another year
spring to me is equally dear

as music I can't hear
waterfalls I know they fall
Niagara must be near
THE SNOW has melted
my poetic deer...

To me this poem feels like cherry blossom tree swinging its branches announcing "no one can now stop me blooming"
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A lot of metaphors:
blue leader bracelet -symbolizing freedom. Both opening and closing the poem. as well freedom from work.
spring cleaning -of yourself
Capitan-
of the floating bridge
connecting… (my favorite)
Army- whims and wishes as commanders.

And you give a nice sketch of yourself in the poem.

“My voice horse from morning silence” I know this one very well.

Oh, yes, there is one thing, you do not always use the definite article where an America ear would expect one.

In this poem there is just one, but I noticed it in other poems as well. And remember I said it was an ear thing, I did not analyse it, so maybe you are more versed than I am. In the first line I think it should be, it is only the beginning of spring. Perhaps because it is a specific time and a specific spring, instead of spring in general. Here, "from morning silence" I accept the article can be left out, as it can be any morning, or all mornings.

Must say again that I enjoyed how gave added significance to the blue leader bracelet by tying it in at the end.

your own inner police force that has gone awol.
apologies. tell me what you think of my response.
i like a good chinwag.

ephx

u skipped my comment
was it a misplaced one
I'll remove it