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FREE FALL

FREE FALL

Wingéd creatures
were we all
tumbling vertiginously
into free Fall.
Bound by sin to dust
suffering is our “must.”
Dreams of Holy Kingdom.
Sleep and fly
into oblivion.

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The elixir of a must,
a mead, a need,
its fusty creed among the weeds of life

we spin inevitably down
and down
to reach the joy of oblivion.

Dust to dust.

I caught the sense of fall from this
my Longobardolino. Anni..

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

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