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Fraud Cum Laude
Conspiring in bank
Friends in High Places to thank
Fleeing as stock sank
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
A 1.7 billion dollars fraud at one of the largest banks and all the conspirators conveniently left the country before the authorities initiated an inquiry.
Editing stage:
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Comments
weirdelf
Sat, 2018-04-21 21:47
Poor banks are too frail
can not be allowed to fail
better off in jail.
cheers,
Jess
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OriginalRhyku
Sat, 2018-04-21 21:31
Great Rhyku response
Only the second line should consist of 7 syllables instead of four. Pithy repartee nonetheless.
author commentweirdelf
Sat, 2018-04-21 21:48
fixed?
fixed?
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
OriginalRhyku
Sun, 2018-04-22 04:22
Weirdelf
Yes
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