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A Formula

floating words
of implicity (and sense)
breathed at the pace
of engaged soliloquy
speaking of meaningful excellences
or bewildering travails

refolding that which has been discerned,
back into life's inevitable, inexorable

finality is not the point
never was
never will be

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I like your no nonsense approach to critiquing my works... telling it like it is...calling 'em as you sees 'em. So far, I have agreed with all your suggestions, observations and assesments. You will keep me on my toes, knock me out of laziness and complacency about poetry, and writing it. I admire intellectual honesty and intelligence....but when I disagree with you, you will here my honest response....hopefully, neither of us has a glass jaw.



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