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A forever faded fancy
A faded
carefree fancy
faintly flickering
into view .
An ashy
eternal essence
who’s passing
presence
still brightly blooms
out a vulnerable
invigorated voice .
Luring all our
lives together
into the chilled
charred chains
of a choice.
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Edward nigma
Mon, 2022-10-03 20:36
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/4Y-hmaltmxs
Talking about how our nostalgia acts like a subtle spider silently sewing you into the wistful world of the past.
Cause the character of Norma Desmond is just that a bitter bug cautiously sewn upon the minimal minor moments of merriment too crushed to crawl out of the past . And so with no other option indulges herself within a self constructed fantasy .
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
author commentLavender
Tue, 2022-10-04 19:25
A forever faded fancy
Hello, Edward,
Your title is perfect. These are some of the feelings nostalgia tends to bring about. Excellent video.
Thank you,
L