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FOREST OF LIFE

IN THE FOREST
I'm hiding seeing
you are reading my poetry
as time glances by
I read you hidden
below autumn leaves

i still visualize the beach
swimming afloat

many poets still for me dote
do you from far off land
should I from you expect a vote
do quickly quote
ere my life they say
poet wrote

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this one starts out strong but then ends weak.......kinda like we old folks lol

Stan at times I also scribble
age slips
but cannot skip

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