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FOREST

Forest,
A single tree doesn't make you.

Sometimes I convince myself that I am enough,
I raise my shoulders and charge like a battalion.

But I'm just a tree surrounded by grasses
A single tree doesn't make a forest.

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but don't feel that you have given us enough. The theme is good, but I suppose that being a tree in a field is the best that we will get out of it. ~ Geezer.
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