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FOLIAGE IS

Beautiful
in HOPES FOR EVER WE REMAIN
Birds come and sing
then fly away
that's life's ways always

none has come for ever to stay
life is like forest foliage

autumn may come as it may
great foliage smoulders away
you too may

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Free verse
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Music has always been the biggest cure for maladies of love be sure i did love playing in a band now i am deaf can't self cure but read lips and mind musifies it thanks all
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I really like what you wrote in the last notes: " read lips and mind (musifies) it thanks all" musifies" what a great term!

yes, we fly high for awhile, especially when we are young...then we move on to the conclusion of our lives.

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

LIKE SHAKES...I too create new words

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Musifying it does it for me too! Good work.~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

For your yeps
ooo lalala lalala

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