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Flower of Scotland

Oh Flower of Scotland, how you bloom


Amidst the hills and valleys,

you loom 
Your thistle so proud,

your spirit is so strong


Your beauty and grace, forever a song

From the blood on Culloden's field


To the battles fought with sword and shield


You stood your ground, you never gave in


Your courage and resilience, a Scottish sin

Your people are so fierce, so bold, and true


Their hearts beating with passion anew


From Edinburgh Castle to Glasgow's streets


Your spirit lives on, and your melody beats

Oh Flower of Scotland, your thistle unfurled


Your symbol of freedom, your banner hurled


From the Highlands to the Lowlands below


Your story of triumph, forever aglow

So let us raise our voices high


And sing of Scotland, until we die


For we are the sons and daughters of this land


And the Flower of Scotland, forever at hand

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This poem is a beautiful tribute to Scotland and its people. It paints a vivid picture of the country's spirit and resilience, while also conveying a sense of pride and passion. The use of imagery is particularly effective in conveying the poem's central message. The poem also effectively captures Scotland's history and culture, invoking an emotional response from the reader. One suggested line edit is to replace "Your people are so fierce, so bold, and true
" with "Your people are so brave and loyal". This more accurately conveys the strength and courage of the Scottish people. Overall, this is a strong poem that effectively conveys the spirit of Scotland.

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