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Flight Number Neopoet

Submitted by loved on Sun, 2012-03-04 11:44

I was flying last week

My co-passenger was from

'' Holland''

I felt twas my good luck
traversing the seven seas
with your perfumed poetry...
I nearly asked of him
then fell short of words,
he ought to have known
the poet in you
Ma'am....

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Tue, 2012-03-13 10:53

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This went right over my head, i shall wait for others to talk of this.
There seems to be a story but needs finishing, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Tue, 2012-03-13 12:15

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and a guy from ma'am Anns place
was my co passenger
so I thought he would have known
the poet we all know
but in person
that's about all.

loved

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