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Fleeting Summit:
Members meeting groan
Seven equals six plus one
Unity alone
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Sparrow 42
Sun, 2019-07-14 04:03
OriginalRhyku
As Japanese writing goes this was really an adding exercise, I think that seeing you have the syllables count right there are better things to lay before our eyes.
But as a template excellent,
Yours Ian
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