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Fleeting Summit:

Members meeting groan
Seven equals six plus one
Unity alone

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

As Japanese writing goes this was really an adding exercise, I think that seeing you have the syllables count right there are better things to lay before our eyes.
But as a template excellent,
Yours Ian

Words can build a nation

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