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Flawless Ladyness

Submitted by Teddy15 on Mon, 2020-08-03 15:48

I'd rather come from nothing
and be something
Than come from something
and be nothing.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
And that's just what I did.
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Mon, 2020-08-03 16:36

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you did! Geez.
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Teddy15

Mon, 2020-08-03 17:14

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You are so kind.

Thank you...Teddy

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c lynn brooks

Wed, 2020-08-05 16:22

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If yu were going for a Haiku you missed it
a nice piece of thought there though

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Teddy15

Wed, 2020-08-05 16:33

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no i wasn't going for 5 7 5 i just wanted to put this down, as i have an idea of maybe putting my phrases together, been reading oscar wilde too much lately , lol but thanks for asking, i'm sure this ones been done a million times but i just wanted to do it my own way, see how it sounds.

Thank you...Teddy

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