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Flawless Ladyness

I'd rather come from nothing
and be something
Than come from something
and be nothing.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
And that's just what I did.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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you did! Geez.
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You are so kind.

Thank you...Teddy

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If yu were going for a Haiku you missed it
a nice piece of thought there though

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no i wasn't going for 5 7 5 i just wanted to put this down, as i have an idea of maybe putting my phrases together, been reading oscar wilde too much lately , lol but thanks for asking, i'm sure this ones been done a million times but i just wanted to do it my own way, see how it sounds.

Thank you...Teddy

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