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flaw
The condition to unconditionally love another
permits the inherent flaw of
unconditional tolerance. Oh no, in
silence of the future, in firm conviction of
one’s heart. Before & after will
not be the same. Life as it is, covers of
various realities. As it is, reality tells you
truth.
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2021-09-24 20:26
So much in here
I like the assessment within
Perhaps use more metaphor, and allusion in it
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