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Fire and Claw Cadenza

Fire and claw
the devil's dancing out

tonight
under the bushes
low winds howl

the bowels of the earth
have opened wide,
they spew the latent odours
from their guts
and roam secretly
about below the huts of man,

stirring the brew
of fogs legs
and toads slippers
to a pulp
among the rotting fungi

a smile a mile across
as the gape of the earth parts
swallows the woods

regurgitated
they swim out on the cascades
of dirty foam
in the old weir
dark, dank, dreaded
and black

oozing mud that stinks
like the back end of a brontosaurus
all insects run for cover
as waves of sinking matter
swirl round and round
to disappear

in the vortex
of the drains of hell

a dandelion ventures out
where none has grown before
what's all the fuss
it shakes its yellow head
sending dandruff everywhere

pollutes the soup
of composted leaves
catching spiders legs
and sausages
cast from the house on the hill
the whole garbage can
floats and shivers in the blasts

glassy beetles cling to drainpipes
centipedes run
wood lice hide
and the ancient crow watches
cackling a cadenza for his love.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Garbage symphony.
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Comments

anyone could make music with garbage, it would be you. " LIke the backend of a brontasaurus"! I love that one!
I also love the image of a dandelion shaking it's head and sending dandruff everywhere. Love to my Queen, ~ Sir Gee.

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That's the sound from unowhere in Norwegian. QQUeeenie.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

author comment

I'm not only airy fairy nature contrary- though I do love it in my every day.

I also love GARBAGE it has a certain "je ne sais quoi" about it.
BIG SMILE: Ann.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

author comment

beautifully crafted, meaning sufficiently ambiguous to allow the reader their full feelings, extraordinary imagery.

Possibly the best and most powerful poem of your I have read.

I adore it.

cheers,
Jess
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Here, you make me SMILE, humour in things usually considered grimy is the most powerful, as I said before, one has to stand on one's head to get the right perspective on things, that gives the writer and the readers of such works licence to be a bit crazy themselves and try it out.

The brian likes to play and wishes only that it too could turn upside down,
wow I wonder if it did WHAT WOULD IT PRODUCE?

Food for thought, or for the nourishment of the ol'brain. Ann

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

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