This is really beautiful. It doesn't necessarily meet the sonnet's requirements, yet it is still well written. I athought you should write more structured poetry.
Bravo!

shouldn't it be "bring"

Troubles with meter. Some forced rhymes.
They say the greatest compliment is the ability to criticize.
This kicks structured western ass.
Lover, this is possibly the finest poem you have ever written. It is surely the best I have read.
Well done my lover. Well, so very well done.

This is generally a fine sonnet but all works can be improved. The first three lines are classic. The fourth lets it down somewhat. Maybe something like two hearts honest and even. Next verse could read Into the darkest corners where only heaven smiles.

It is one of the best things you've written and has massive potential.
Of course it would improve with fine tuning, most poems do.
In the penultimate line, you say 'off of'- some would argue that this isn't grammatically incorrect, but it's poor language at best. It doesn't read smoothly either.
'The sweeping off of your feet from the floor
Makes me confident to lead you to my door'

Perhaps a better line and keeping the 10 syllable count would be
'The sweeping you off your feet from the floor'

'The sweeping you off your feet from the floor
makes me believe you will come to my door.'

Lovedly, these are just suggestions, I'm sure you can come up with your own.
Jx

Now, if you showed two versions of the final couplet for a vote, I would go for the first one.

I think that this one is very good and if true to form with some small edits would make an excellent piece.
Sonnets are to me too much of messing about with syllables and lines, I am glad it was not me to attempt this task.
Messages from the poets pen need to me to be more fun and not held by a strict rule of words.
Well done young Bard for pushing the limits.
I may feel to write a sonnet one day ??
You take care, Yours, Ian..

The sweeping you off your feet from the floor
makes me believe you will come to my door.

The reason I prefer this one is that the other talks of being confident. Not at all the way I would try to win favours.

You know which I prefer Lovedly, if only for the reason 'off, of' is clumsy. Jx

Both keith and I prefer the same one. Jx

What you post should remain. Change if you will, but leave the original alone.

Second verse, lines one and two, either smiles or brings should be singular (not both).

You're a hard man to get hold of.
I'll get straight to the point. I'm going to run a workshop on basic meter (with Jess' permission) and I would like very much for you to moderate. What say you? Have you the time and the inclination?

but still not a sonnet. There are rules to follow and you did not. Still and all a "lovely" poem.

but I honour your achievements.

I hope I have not done you a dis-service with my reading-
https://soundcloud.com/neopoet/lets-sonetize-our-love
may I have your permission to post it to our Neopoet Facebook page?