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Fear Not We All Are Mortals ......EDIT TYPO

Fear Not We All Mortals

FEAR NOT
WE ALL ARE
MORTALS
brought by pleasurable actions
of lively exciting couples
born to face similar lives controlled by
HERITAGE
ENVIRONMENT
CIRCUMSTANCE
each one has different
HEC
even twins
we are human
not blue prints

of trees
and
animals

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
YES WE ALL ARE MORTALS IN QUEUE WHEN WILL GO WHO ----NEEDS TO BREAK THE Q
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

dear friend Lovedly,

first of all, you may want to take out the second "ARE" in the title, to tidy the poem up a bit. this is the second poem that I have read this morning that is based in simple truth. both simple and to the point :) I enjoyed it very much.

*hugs, Cat

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