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Far from this Madness

I wish to be a bird
soaring high
even though lonely
in the vast sky

the world appears
mad to me
greedy
gluttons
bloating
hoarding
all minds of
wealthy
and
sweeping virginity
ahead

all power is being misused
rapes galore
gals and guys lie
openly on the floor
with no respects
for elderly

take me far away
from this world
of madness only

I pray up there
to some Lord
may be

Take me...
''Far, far from this
Madness''

Will ye...

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Free verse
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Comments

the poem is well constructed, but the fact is that the theme of the poem is what makes life to be sweet
and the world cannot escape from it till Armageddon.

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author comment

Hello Lovedly, this world is full of challenges, facing them squarely and not wishing to soar high away from them would make you stronger. A beautiful poem, Lovedly.

for ur lovely comment
kindness

author comment

It's my pleasure Lovedly.

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