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''FAR AWAY AND LONG AGO''...SOUTH AMERICA

''FAR AWAY AND LONG AGO''
Life of young lonely kids
in orchards
if I remember correctly
---1954/5/6
In the vast
Orchards of South America
from where you may hail now

Many lambs
must have been sacrificed
many more reborn

This human race is full of animals
shall never be left forlorn

twice as many will be born
Man has only one hobby

Do you want me to narrate it

Glad you all are a step
or maybe two
ahead of me
simply
lovedly

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
SENIOR CAMBRIDGE 195/5/6 LITERATURE DISTINCTION POETRY derived as a possible PRODIGY
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

lol. You are fun!

Thank you...Teddy

I am one among many human
just enjoying humor
as PUN

Western world's Fun
you know
No15
the only reason
how mammalian life
is begun

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