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Falling
The moment when
Everything is
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Apart
But yet it’s
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Right
Into place
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Comments
Temporal Fugue
Mon, 2019-11-18 11:15
Hahah! All too true DF! :D
Hahah! All too true DF! :D
Words pieced and placed, so perfectly
as poetry
embraced
Defygravity
Mon, 2019-11-18 11:18
Thank you!!! :)
Thank you!!! :)
Geezer
Mon, 2019-11-18 11:16
Welcome to Neopoet...
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Defygravity
Mon, 2019-11-18 11:19
Thank you I appreciate any
Thank you I appreciate any comments good or not! I look
Forward to sharing my work here!