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Falling

Submitted by Defygravity on Mon, 2019-11-18 11:10

The moment when
Everything is
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
Apart
But yet it’s
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
Right
Into place

Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft

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Temporal Fugue

Mon, 2019-11-18 11:15

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Hahah! All too true DF! :D

Words pieced and placed, so perfectly
as poetry
embraced

Defygravity

Mon, 2019-11-18 11:18

Thank you!!! :)

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Geezer

Mon, 2019-11-18 11:16

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Defygravity

Mon, 2019-11-18 11:19

Thank you I appreciate any comments good or not! I look
Forward to sharing my work here!

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