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Faith

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2019-11-11 22:41

He left my side,
so that from the world
I shouldn't hide
the faith that we are
what we are
not left bereft

humans can extend their imagination
to far off distant inconceivable destination
to explore
the life of those
who are not like us

we are rich
they maybe poor
but adjustment in life gives us a cheer
we make our own crucial decisions
and
call it destiny
the rich and poor can intermingle

have faith we all are one

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Free verse
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Geezer

Wed, 2019-11-13 10:14

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Yes, we should be able to all get along, but there are these things called ego and pride. Too bad that we can't stifle our urges to be the same, yet different. ~ Gee.
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Barbara Writes

Wed, 2019-11-13 10:30

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we should all get along rich or poor..one day we all will be rich even if it's not in money and gold..but living our best life on our terms not society. well written

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lovedly

Wed, 2019-11-13 13:12

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what a delight
having poetess like you

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c lynn brooks

Wed, 2019-11-13 15:08

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tour lst line says it all

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lovedly

Wed, 2019-11-13 16:54

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yes all so true

thanks for ur maiden visit

c lyn brooks

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Barbara Writes

Wed, 2019-11-13 19:03

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my pleasure

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Rottiestyl

Thu, 2019-11-14 16:17

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I interpreted this to mean those of us rich in faith are just as important as those who are not rich in that aspect. That we should share the faith we adore with all. This is entirely faith based. I know you wrote it under “faith” but you truly emit exactly that. Loved it.

Rottie
Pegasus was a genius,
living within a suit of difference.
He liked what he was,
nodded in respect and
simply flew . . . away.

By: K. Mulroney

" I am who I am, say what I say, do what I do. With no apology."

lovedly

Thu, 2019-11-14 18:52

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He* left my side,
so that from the world
I shouldn't hide
the faith that we are what we are not left bereft
*MY LONG TIME FRIEND PHILOSOPHER AND GUIDE
left me bereft the next day ----A VICTIM of Spiritualism

**humans can extend their imagination
to far off distant inconceivable destination
to explore the life of those who are not like us
**THIS PORTION SPEAKS OF a USA guy traced by his long distance g friend

we(SOME USA /CANADIEANS) are strikingly rich (west)
they(EAST) maybe poor
but adjustment in life gives us a cheer we make our own crucial decisions
and call it destiny
the rich and poor can intermingle THEY Finally got married

have faith we all are one .........>>>>>FAITH AS YOU DEEM FIT

Missed you interaction
glad you have returned

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Umeh Collins Ebube

Fri, 2019-11-15 01:43

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Well penned

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lovedly

Fri, 2019-11-15 14:32

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thanks a lot

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lovedly

Sun, 2020-03-01 05:27

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for those who may still like to read it

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