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THE FACEOFF

Death, you'll only pass once through in someone's life, and your crunching footsteps will no longer be heard again. Your invasion towards humanity will be a thing of the past. Those whom you had forcefully taken are not yet dead but lives!

They lie in wait, resting for a moment of time.
So, always know-, you do not have the potency to maim and kill. Those whom you thought you've killed are not yet dead. But, only been hypnotized by your domination of fear and threats.

In the dreamless slumber, a soul had a quick shuttle. There's hope their vacation is returnable.
So, Death, do not boast as if you're the mighty warrior. Remember, your time is up; you'll soon surrender. And your will power will be trashed!

Time will tell when all your pomposity will fade away. Your wings, claws and hooves shall be clipped off! No one else shall be a prey in life anymore. All shall be sound and saved by the arrival of the messiah. For there in our hopes lie.

Adieu all the departed gentle souls!

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