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The eye of light

Pink purple paladins
Parting the Cloud
corrupted sky
Looming towards
The lords
Vivacious
vermillion
Eye.
that
Rushes out
It’s
refulgent
Red Ruby
rays of light.
That
cleanses
the world
from the
Morbid realms
of midnight.

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Fascinating stuff, I can see the rays of the sun so strong. You have a full stop by the word eye but I think it's a typo. Seems to me this is a ride into infinity but that's just what I see.
Always such a pleasure to read your work.

Thank you...Teddy

And it’s such a pleasure in reading your comments

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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