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Eye to Eye

Submitted by Teddy15 on Mon, 2020-11-30 05:44

As I look out of my cage
It’s the Dragons eye that I see
I just know it,
He is my panoramic view
I see visions of a sea of greens and purples
Sometimes he gently blinks
Sending a slight wind onto my sad face
I can smell a musky smoke
And I can feel a slight puff from his breath
As I close my eyes to rest.

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Last few words: 
a change of title, it was Dragons Eye.
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Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Teddy15

Mon, 2020-11-30 12:49

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It has nothing to do with marijuana, I shall look at that line now, thank you.
It's about being up close to a dragon. Seems he is a protector.

Thank you...Teddy

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