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Exotic Nights

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2021-08-26 17:04

All nights want to be
ecstatic and exotic

we must undress silence
kindly enjoy this only life

let night be musically
vibrational

we are or we were born
out of the silence of night ~~~
but still laughing
shrieking
till angels fall from heaven
seeking us

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Thu, 2021-08-26 20:06

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the dawn a' coming,
it's coming 'round the bend
We're stuck here on the Earth
but good times are here again

Music from the angels
keeps on us on our toes
Dancing to the beat
to a tune that we all know

Sorry, just couldn't resist!
I like your poem, it gives the sense that everything isn't as bad as it might be.
~ Geez.
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lovedly

Thu, 2021-08-26 23:12

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What comes from the inner core
depth of the heart
from whose heart other than Gee's
can it ever be an integral part

Thanks Gee after Sparrow
I love thee
May be friends as you always say
last birth we must have been
in he wilderness
where deserts must have been serene
must be rainier pastures

to have a good friend like you
one needs genes of diamonds
you know GEE
thanks to thee

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Jackweb

Fri, 2021-08-27 17:38

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All nights want to be
ecstatic and exotic

we must undress silence
kindly enjoy this only life

let night be musically
vibrational
first, you're a poet indeed. i love the construction of the verse. Very apt! these lines above clothes the body of the poem with energy and truly they are well chosen. Its just a sweet verse in my eyes. Good write up Lovedly

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

lovedly

Sat, 2021-08-28 11:31

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Grateful for
the score
thanks I see you have come after a very long break
Jack

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Jackweb

Sat, 2021-08-28 12:19

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O yes..things beyond my power here in Nigeria. Its not an easy road at all. But thank God he is impossibility specialist. i'm glad the neopoet family is greatly waxing strong.

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

lovedly

Sat, 2021-08-28 20:48

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all are real
all else is imagery
I don't subscribe to any
you may continue

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lovedly

Mon, 2021-08-30 01:27

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which ones GEE AND MARK

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