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every drop

every drop in the ocean
i'm walking on truth,
on the coals of regret,
the odd broken tooth.

it helps fill the gaps
on one poet's corner
where i showered you flowers
and toed with the fauna

as they licked my arse
'cause that's how it goes.
we may weigh our winters
by a drip on the nose.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
nothing really matters but for the now like a broken trough for a thirsty cow. adieu.
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Comments

I would have said; "By a drip from the nose". But nice little poem!
~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

it makes one's ablutions more the merrier!

g

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'''coals of regret,''

*regret

did you not that imply
do apprise me kindly

thank you muchly for your words. appreciated.

g

p.s. - apologies for the delay.

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