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eventuality

In the hour of the
event
only two things count
friends
prayers
and
self meditation
that is the voice of
an angel
you know not really

except as Loved or Lovedly
free verse
not worse!

Crap Gem and Machine Gun
all like a Hamburgher
chilies and sauce
and
then a laugh!

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Ancient thoughts
of love and money
are no more relevant
seek thy inner self
guys and gals date
as one night stands
gain love/sex /lust
money buys

Be aware
of a changing world
some economist
has just said today
thirty years hence
the world would be in an economic disaster
who will then be thy master...question yourself !

MONEY ONLY WILL BUY HONEY
THEN
the bees one, not human
wake up to modern reality
only money can buy
all else is loving theory
believe in me
and
your own experience
gals and guys
love each other as living- in
pay equal money as share
and
you all living in sweet ignorance
still you call bliss
laugh at me
sharpen your understanding
don't go after theory only
Money is life
in living
illness
and
comforts of death
after life for some.....
minuscule few
true or not it's up to you...

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'crap gem and machine gun'
man...like having your mood ring for good luck
in Lao's...Air America...
got tunes on tonight...this ghastly spooky cold wind
clear air...i feel random creeping...
work morrow....got stuff done here tonight
gotta get back to what i used to do...

every now and then you write these rad
'gems'
made me laugh this one...
like the old beats...
good for you Lovedly!

mr wolf!

you alone are such a sweet poet and person here
you knows which one's are gems
hope jess finds em too I guess

we all are in the same boat I do profess
but some going Eastwards
some West
no one knows which is the best

but eskerrrrrrrrr
you are a poet of class
none can you surpass
thanks for your walk besides
I am now in cloud 9

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