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Even love unreturned has its rainbow (Letter to my imaginary lover)

Oh, Shakespeare my darling, to thee I do speak
Of a time in my being, I wish we could meet

Your words and passion, in me I do seek
The Sonnet in you, that I search within me

This play in my heart, that I keep for thee
The need to write poems, for you to read

I desire a lesson, just you and me
Answers on rhythm and rhyming I need

I’m curious, your talent is so very clear
“Hell is empty and all the devils are here”

Your poetry makes my mind want to paint
To your words, my love I can truly relate

Hoping to find you, somewhere in me
with no style I’m lost, I just cannot see

Come to my dream, at least one time?
Give me your wisdom on midnight’s chime

O lover thou be mine, O lover thou be?
Would you, could you desire me?

My question therefore

To be or not to be?

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Oh yes, tonight i'm in love with Shakespeare. “Hell is empty and all the devils are here” quote of shakespeare PS please do not complain about the title. lol It's also part of a quote of Shakespeare, "a letter to my imaginary lover" is mine This is free verse rhyming I don't even know if it exists
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how could Willy resist your invitation? lol. (He will be right over.)

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how very kind, i shall wait here then. lol

Thank you...Teddy

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I knew you couldn't resist the gleam of my shoes' silver buckles. They do it to a girl's heart every time, lol. Thank you for accepting my sonnet. Willy S.

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Hello Terry, wonderful ode dwelling on Willy. I used to know several soliloquies by heart, it was at school. All forgotten.
I think the title and content are fine. As it's fairly long, I need to return for a second or third read.
Enjoyed, Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

thank you for your feedback, yes i do have all different size poems, i also own one of the smallest its called "love Letter" if you ever wanted to read it it's here on my home page. Always a pleasure to see you.

Thank you...Teddy

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Whatever form it be...it moves easily ....nice flow and rhythm and of course beautiful verses.....

enjoyed it...

raj (sublime_ocean)

how very kind, its simply free verse however it has rhyme, i have no idea if it is a form but i doub't it its just me, being me. Thank you dear friend.

Thank you...Teddy

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