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Evasion
Bird watching-
My buds and I.
Stunning-
Is she a mirage?
Territory-
Mine boys!
My approach-
Country roads.
Her response-
City streets laughter.
Back to buds-
Creative evasion.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
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