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EPIPHANY

I'm that light in the dark ,
Not the usual that defeats darkness
Or that which presence can't be denied.
I complement the lightlessness
And my dimness leaves me unidentified

I'm that light in the dark,
Not vibrant like the faintest flash
Or visible like the weakest star in the night sky.
You know, the dark comprehends my shine
And my glow is invisible.

I'm that light in the dark
Who wish to be at the front line
But my dimness makes question my existence
A light or a clone?
A light or a glorified cliche?

I'm that light in the dark
You'll figure I ain't all bright
A dark light you might say
But in my ignorance,
I command and beautify thousands

I'm that light in the dark
Free from the shadows
I embraced my being and discovered that;
I ain't just any light in the dark,
But that which shines brighter than the summer's sun

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Oh I think your theme is gorgeous and wow, language too. It is a good thing to always keep a candle of hope burning and you have really done that right to the very end.

Thank you...Teddy

Thank you so much sir I deeply appreciate your thought

Oriii

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