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Epiphanies

Submitted by Geremia on Sat, 2013-02-09 16:05

EPIPHANIES

I let my silence speak
what words fail to tell…..
meaningless is the flow
of metaphor and rhyme
when you only see
a shadow of me
in space and time.

I wonnder at life's mysteries
and seem to wander too deeply
into myself
only to discover
there are no epiphanies

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Esker

Fri, 2013-04-19 12:50

Esker's picture

finding them too lately
Like your introspection
Geremia

a poem I needed today
off to find whats left of
me in the rain

in the social populace
and the distractions
of nature

this grace
of spring

loved

Fri, 2013-04-19 13:40

loved's picture

meaningless is the flow....

'''''''''''of metaphor and rhyme.....

how so very true

coming from a poetic stalwart
the likes of you

loved

Geremia

Sat, 2013-04-20 17:14

Geremia's picture

Your insights are on the mark Takes me while 2 reply...not wriiiitng much, May try later,

joe

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