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Enough!

Enough!

pain...
like electricity
shooting through
to nerve endings
pulsating,
insideous and raw
until all I can think of is
pain...
joints on fire
from shoulder to finger tips,
back to hips
to knees!
these target areas
blaze in agony
fibromyalgia
and psoriatic arthritis...
when is it enough!???

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*I'm having a very bad day, following a very bad night.
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sorry to know the pain you are enduring...it is perceptible in these verses.....wish you a good relief ...

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

as the day dwindles to evening, it gets worse. but by morning's light it eases up. thank you for your kind wishes.

*hugs, Cat
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When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

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my continued best wishes for you to get well soon...

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

I hear you I am going thorough the same with my forearm and hand it never ends does it

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it seems like there is always a new one just waiting to appear. Steve says thank you for the suggestions.he will work on it later :)

*love ya, Cat
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When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
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I feel your pain through your words,I hope you feel better tomorrow darling poetess. Sleep better too. This poem has attitude enough is enough!

Thank you...Teddy

by bedtime I am almost in tears...I'm too darned mean to cry, lol. on top of it, I am an amnesiac! but a sleeping pill helps. and Steve reads to me every night. that relaxes me. I'm almost human by morning. thank you for being you!

*warm hugs, Cat
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When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
http://eddystyx.mythramuse.com/

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sorry about your aches, but you being a white witch, don't you have a magic potion you could try for those pesky ailments? Sometimes I must tell you (privately) about mine. Take care of yourself, Sweets.
Jerry

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I use meditation and self-hypnosis, when I can get past the pain and concentrate, it isn't easy, tho. would love to read your secret recipe! thanks!

*hugs, Cat
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When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
http://eddystyx.mythramuse.com/

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