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Enough!

Enough!

pain...
like electricity
shooting through
to nerve endings
pulsating,
insideous and raw
until all I can think of is
pain...
joints on fire
from shoulder to finger tips,
back to hips
to knees!
these target areas
blaze in agony
fibromyalgia
and psoriatic arthritis...
when is it enough!???

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*I'm having a very bad day, following a very bad night.
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sorry to know the pain you are enduring...it is perceptible in these verses.....wish you a good relief ...

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

as the day dwindles to evening, it gets worse. but by morning's light it eases up. thank you for your kind wishes.

*hugs, Cat
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my continued best wishes for you to get well soon...

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

I hear you I am going thorough the same with my forearm and hand it never ends does it

Chrys

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it seems like there is always a new one just waiting to appear. Steve says thank you for the suggestions.he will work on it later :)

*love ya, Cat
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"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
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by bedtime I am almost in tears...I'm too darned mean to cry, lol. on top of it, I am an amnesiac! but a sleeping pill helps. and Steve reads to me every night. that relaxes me. I'm almost human by morning. thank you for being you!

*warm hugs, Cat
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"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
http://eddystyx.mythramuse.com/

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I use meditation and self-hypnosis, when I can get past the pain and concentrate, it isn't easy, tho. would love to read your secret recipe! thanks!

*hugs, Cat
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"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
http://eddystyx.mythramuse.com/

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