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In the end,
The Lord almighty shall seek reproof
And cause Behemoth to roar
And his roar shall frighten the earth.
The vapor from his lungs,
Shall break down cedars in the forest,
And one of his foot shall,
Sink Everest beneath the earth
He shall encompass the earth,
With great turbulence and anger
And their weapons shall be vain upon his might.

In that day,
Leviathan The Mighty Fish
Shall shatter their mighty vessels
Like they were flimsy glasses to the rocks
And her turmoil will divide the ocean,
That the splashes of water in her unrest,
Will be enough to drown fifty cities.

Then Ziz shall descend,
Like trillions of eagles in one dreadful fleet,
Her talons reaping Hyperion and Ash from their roots,
Her beak as of all the steel of Valerian
The wind from her flapping wings,
Will cause a terrible storm,
Throwing men and their riches into the belly of Hades.

There will be a great war,
Between the greatest and fiercest beasts of the earth,
The clash shall be more disastrous than a terrible earthquake,
That even the dinosaur and the dragon and the griffin,
Shall seek refuge in the abyss.

As for Adam,
He shall come naked before the Lord,
And the Angels shall rejoice over his impotence,
He shall strip naked,
And forsake all his wisdom and knowledge and cunning,
He shall bequeath his Principalities,
And fall to the earth with his face upon his bruised knees,
And worship the almighty,
For his bitterness and sorrows shall quench the sun,
And the moon shall be lost in the horizon,
His tears shall flood the earth.

But YAHWEH shall take pity upon his tribulation,
And shall pardon all his transgressions through the Lamb.
And so shall it be that in one of those days,
The Lord shall open the heavens,
And Azziggard, which is also Micheal, which is also Yesu,
Shall descend with a mighty sword.
He shall take Behemoth, Leviathan and Ziz in one hand
And slew them all with the other hand
And cast them too into the abyss
Where the griffin, and the dragon and the dinosaur hide
And they shall be lost from the face of the earth forever.

And it shall come to pass as it was written in the ancient scroll
"Now the dwelling of God is with men, and he will live with them. They will be his people, and God himself will be with them and be their God. He will wipe every tear from their eyes. There will be no more death or mourning or crying or pain, for the old order of things has passed away." He who was seated on the throne said, "I am making everything new!"

I have seen the end and a new beginning!

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