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ENCONIUM TO FRIENDS ON NEOPOET

Submitted by Geremia on Fri, 2016-02-26 09:26

ENCONIAM TO MY FRIENDS AT NEOPOET

Your words are the wings that
carry me far from lonely places.
and your thoughts are magic spells
that fill my lungs so I can speak again.
my heart beats to the rhythm of yours
and my Spirit soars to new heights
of hope and of courage
your love and affection are matched
by mine…and your hands are the ones
I will hold when it comes my time,

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lovedly

Fri, 2016-02-26 09:35

of hope and of courage

and
this is the essence of all times

HOPE LOVE AND COURAGE
stay calm and cool
you have the best poetic tool
so still on neopoets you alone rule

Geremia

Fri, 2016-02-26 09:44

I try

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lovedly

Fri, 2016-02-26 10:31

good

keep at it
Joe

Sparrow

Fri, 2016-02-26 18:41

Joe

Just think of us and we will be there.
As I have always said that we are but a thought away.
Though I reckon that you will be OK to travel on your own.
Just remember that they will always be there to greet you.
Our unconditional Love to you,
From us as always,
Ian and the Children..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Geezer

Fri, 2016-02-26 18:59

We will...

always be the wind beneath your wings. We love our brother and hold him in our hearts, so that he never fades away. ~ Gee

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alidzain

Sat, 2016-02-27 03:02