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Emotions In Colors

Emotions In Colors

Color Me:
relaxed is blue
dark blue is peaceful
jittery is light green
dark green has me feeling mean
yellow is hostile, on edge,
someone could be pushed from the ledge.
purple is passion,
which possesses.
energy and resolve
found in shades of red,
it always clears my head.
within shades of grey
walking the razor's edge.
black is my home, and protector
it's all can be said,
except it's great melded with red.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

You have made the colors your own. I am sure that many people don't see all colors the way that everyone else does.
Your images are of a distinct personality, one that chooses to discern them on how they make you feel. The flow is good, and I don't really see any way that I could improve it. ~ Geez.
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WOW!
your critique has made my Month!!! you can't know how great you have made me feel. eddy wanted to write the poem. but only one of us could enter the contest :( hmm, I wonder...

* BIG Hugs, Cat

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This blew me away. I love how you accented colors and emotions. Wonderful! Thanks for sharing. Love and light. Namaste

Love and light. Namaste.

for the read and the comment. your enthusiasms are inspirational! have a great day!

*hugs, Cat

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