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EMOTIONAL COLOURS REVIEW THE FIRST CAT'S

When you are playing in garden of Eden
devour the green be happy
(happy is Green)
while swimming in the ocean
wear a blue bikini
merge with what's next waiting for thee
Sad is NOT blue
Never ever be angry
your lover will bring roses
red so many
you will cheer up Betty
Angry is redYES 'TIS A SIGN OF WAR

don't ever feel dull
grey is for fools
not you
Tired is gray.....
enjoy oranges lovely feeling
when you are pealing lol
Worried is orange...Ah!
when she comes in a yellow dress
just whistle she'll say
you look like Dorris day
only smile
don't ask Doris who
Love is yellow yes pretty gals love it.....
as you are invited for a softy
be calm like aqua
cool like silent lake water
Calm is aqua
a time will now come
when you wanna jump
say Violet where
in hell are you
I need you
Excited is violet obviously sexy
When his lips are chilly
say give me rum and lime
Embarrassed is lime..tastes bitter
When in darkness be not scared
go bare cling him
Scared is black ...but here comes an opportunity
when the sky is darkened blue
will it snow or rain ask the met will you
Confused is dark blue
Be smart never silly
PURPLE is only for Royalty
you'd wish to be
Silly is purple WHO SAID?

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
VIBGYOR I KNEW you say something now NEW
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I love your take on all the colors! you should enter this in the: "Emotions In Colors" contest!

*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy

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Its too long shall modify it then do advise kindly your interest in my off the cuff poetry is intriguing thanks ma'am

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When you play in the garden of Eden
devour greenery be happy
swimming in the ocean wear a blue bikini
merge with what's next waiting
Never ever be angry lovers bring roses
red so many you will cheer up Betty

never feel dull grey is for fools
not you

enjoy orange lovely feeling
when you are pealing lol
as she comes in a yellow dress
just whistle she'll say woh hoo
you look like Dorris Day only smile
don't say Doris who

as you are invited for a softy
be calm like aqua
cool like silent lake water

a time will now come
when you wanna jump
say Violet where in hell are you
I need you high sexy are you

When his lips are chilly
say give me rum and lime
in darkness be not scared
go bare cling on to him
here comes an opportunity

as the sky is darkened blue
will it snow or rain ask the met will you
be smart never silly
Purple is only for Royalty
you'd wish to be

author comment

which are your favorite colors? mine are, red, black and purple. a fine write to be sure. you have done some work on this piece and it shows.

*hugs, Cat

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WHITE LILLY S I suppose
Black is for LIBRAS mainly
they merge with the night sky only
None can them see
they merge with BLANK air during day
God only can bless them
Maybe

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