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EMERGENCY

I was like a man in emergency
Loging for attention in urgency
When neopoet came so suddenly
Accepting and caring for me as an Excellency

And this is from neopoet presidency
We are looking poet will can make a sample
So that they can Be in this temple
As our apple

For u to be the apple u must have a mentor
Who is a creator
Who can use words as a sector

Remember in anything u do brothers and sisters
Always remember that you are somebody
Because my God know didn't take time to make a nobody

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as with this one, remember to 'Unpublish' one of them straightaway or it causes confusion and dilutes your feedback.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Managing Directors, with Richard (themoonman)

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