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elm

bare majestic elm

finally time to stay warm

don a coat of green

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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in your coat of green! ~ Geez.
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Hello Mark, I love the brightness of your haiku. It makes me feel cool with all that green. Elms are fantastic trees. Enjoyed.

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THE MARK
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