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Elfchen 01____Proverb

Wisdom workshop
Growing up culture
Pregnant of long sayings

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


This my first poem here, how is it?

author comment

welcome to Neopoet. we are always glad to see a new member amongst our ranks! I'm not sure what your poem means. but I would like to learn. could you explain it to me, please? thanks.

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Nice to see more folks from Africa.

I look forward to reading more of your work!

I had to look up "Elfchen". here is what I found: An "Elfchen" is similar to a Haiku in that it has a set form, however it is unique in that it has 11 words, the lines having 1-2-3-4-1 words, respectively.

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