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Egotistical Vaingloriousness

Submitted by Buddha on Mon, 2016-01-18 00:09

Lashing out unguided missiles
seething anguish aimed awkwardly
bombastic broadsides
hurling hurtful harangues
self righteous rants
belting out berating belittlements
explosive explitive execrations
treacherous taunts
launching outraegous opprobrim
raucous revilement
impulsive lingustic lampoons
pompous polemic profanity
imprudent peacocking
slinging searing sarcasm

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Sparrow

Tue, 2016-01-19 04:16

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A linguistic blast of very large words, they may all have a story to give in their own writes! but all together a maze to the mind.
I wonder if to take each of these words and wrap them in a poem or two would be good for all.
Just asking ???
Yours, Ian..

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Buddha

Tue, 2016-01-19 21:25

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Thank you Bud, Sparrow, Ian... I'm not sure which you enjoy going by. I thank you for the review. Yes, I agree with you, a poem could be made from any of these words. Keep up the good reviewing and poetry.

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