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Eerie Night
In the middle of the night
I had such a fright
there was a noise
ever so slight
My hair stood on end
what was my plight?
Alone and stark naked
as I lay aright
Here it was
the middle of the night
All by myself
on the wild plateau
darkness clouded my sight
Like being in
the deserted
eerie lonely night
Then the door opened
and I shouted with might
The silence answered
and there was no fright
And a nightmare was buried
in a solemn middle of the night
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2019-12-21 08:48
How does this...
work for you?
In the middle of the night
I had such a fright
there was a noise
ever so slight
My hair stood on end
what was my plight?
Alone and stark naked
as I lay aright
Here it was
the middle of the night
All by myself
on the wild plateau
darkness clouded my sight
Like being in
the deserted
eerie lonely night
Then the door opened
and I shouted with might
The silence answered
and there was no fright
And a nightmare was buried
in a solemn middle of the night
~ Gee.
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lovedly
Sat, 2019-12-21 10:19
simply beautiful Gee
you are a poet
I is just learning
replaced it
hopefully more will
enjoy the read
Geezer
Sat, 2019-12-21 15:30
You are...
the poet. I am just the bearer of that good news. Many times, I read your work and understand better than a lot of folks. You have the thoughts. Glad I can help. ~ Gee.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sun, 2019-12-22 02:03
thanks Geez
you are the poet
for who all are looking
including me