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Earth Song

Harken now
as the westerly wind softly intones a low
mournful dirge.

While the reeds at the water’s edge
pick up the sad refrains
and over them
they transpose their quavering
illusionary measures.

Broken up occasionally by a discordant sigh.

The birds passing by
pause a moment
as they listen crestfallen
to the slow, sorrowful lament.

Which they keep time to
with a dull thrumming of the wings.

And a sweet blending-over
of fading trills.

Which becomes barely perceptible
amidst the echo-booms
of the loud thundercloud drums.

And the intermittent tinkling sound
of the raindrops.

As they pelt the leaves
on the musical tree of magical colors.

Which having once danced
and enjoyed life and freedom so much
now stands condemned.

Hopelessly rooted
to this one solitary spot.

And so it droops over
with dampened spirits.

As it beholds the birds,
the wind, the reeds
and all the other players

in this lonely cheerless pastoral.

Trying to recall a time
when it didn’t once glance backwards
and think of things precious
that were
but are no more.

While the grey, somber sky
conductor
of this orchestrated
remembrance

soothes
their saddened spirits
by serenading them
with a melodious rainbow.

Which heralds
the promise of a new day.

When all of nature
will once again
sing in tune.

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Last few words: 
I came up with this after sitting outside during a thunderstorm. Because I was looking for inspiration. I found it.
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Comments

It’s simply magnificent. Must have been one intense thunderstorm.

Tim

Wow. Thank you very much for that, my friend. That is greatly appreciated.

Yes, it was indeed some storm. But it was a different sort of storm. It's like I was not scared as I shoulda been. I mean I was, but I was more interested in just observing how a thunderstorm would play out to someone interested in its inner workings.

And things just sorta happened which allowed me to take those little gestures of mother nature and turn them into poetry.

It was one helluva ride...lol.

Thanks again for the awesome comments, my friend. I really enjoyed them.
Great hearing from you.

Take care.

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Something about watching them certainly does bring inspiration. Well done!

~RoseBlack~

Thanks so much for that, Rose Yes, they really do. Brought me inspiration coming in hard and fast....lol. It was scary, but it was also fun.

I enjoyed hearing from you.

Take care.

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Thanks so much my sweet friend, for your lovely comments. They are very much appreciated.

And yer right of course. The world is filled with inspiration if we not only know where to find it, but if we actively go out looking for the inspiration to make magic happen. Then we are sure to come up with something great.

Thanks again, Kat.

Take care.

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