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Dyslectic Poet

Dyslectic Poet
I have keenly observed,
you always add
portions of a poet’s
rendition,
it adds color to beauty
and perfume
sublime ,
as I now learn lovelier criticism of thine
as upon the delicacies of poetry
and
connoisseur of beauty,
I myself define .
you are the one and only one
immensely refine,
to let me know
when,
if ever I shall be able to pen
in print,
a poetry book of mine
truthfully,
no jam ,no butter
Cat you could be
curt and bitter.

'''one breast discernibly
smaller than the other, or one blue eye
and the other eye green or brown''' CAT.

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You amaze me. Thank You!!!

it adds color to beauty
and perfume
sublime ,
as I now learn lovelier criticism of thine
as upon the delicacies of poetry
and
connoisseur of beauty,

always, Cat (& eddy)

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tell me straight
that I have
a long long way to go

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you still reserve
your wise comments
they convey

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