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Dressed
The thrill of the chase
satin and lace
The ecstasy of being caught
wedding dress sought
The miracle of first born
christening gown, already worn
The sadness of divorce
dressed for hearse
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Structured: Western
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weirdelf
Wed, 2013-02-27 00:50
I get the idea
however it reads a bit like a list.
Usually I suggest less words not more, this could benefit from conjunctions.
cheers,
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sueb
Wed, 2013-02-27 08:45
thanks x
thanks x
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