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Dream Destination

Hope was in driver's seat
coursing on the subconscious freeway
dreaming to a pseudo destination
just beyond the stretch of imagination

Flashes of brilliance leading to a tunnel
"Park your bodies , let go of your final breath,
This way to Salvation"
proclaimed the Signage

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Wanted to add an element of mystery to the Title, hence changed it from "Hopefully" to "Destination X"

raj (sublime_ocean)

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good to know you liked it...

warmly..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Much better driven by hope than despair. A good short poem.............scribbler

Thank you Stan for the time to read this one and appreciative comment..

warmly....

raj (sublime_ocean)

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This is a really good metaphor. And I love the tunnel imagery, that's just magic, especially for a long-commute driver like me, heehee.

And I agree with Scribbler...better hope than despair in the driver's seat.

Respectfully, Jim

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good to know you liked the use of the metaphor...thank you for your words...

warmly...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Thank you for your comment....as an amateur i use poetry as a means of unwinding and de-stressing from the daily routine....when it comes good (not always) and is appreciated by readers like you..it keeps me inspired to keep learning and evolving...which is why i find Neopoet a great workshop...

warmly...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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i am happy to know you liked this one..thank you for the comment...

much love...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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thank you for the read and your comment...

much love..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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A very imaginative poem. I love the idea that

"hope is in the drivers seat.... dreaming to a pseudo destination
just beyond the stretch of imagination - headed for a dream destination.

Wonderful positivity.

Love Mand xxxxxxxx

thank you for your appreciative comment...

hope you have eased well into the New Year..

much love..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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